I thought this was a very lovely concept, and it's different than most submissions because you had two 'routes.' True was a dear, but I would have liked to see the narrator call Lupus's bluffs. He felt like he was just horny baiting you the whole time, which is fine, but nothing ever actually happens. And given the inspiration for his character filling in for parts of his backstory, I would have liked less exposition and more action from him. I also wanted to say that the artwork was really well done. Great work!
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I thought this was a very lovely concept, and it's different than most submissions because you had two 'routes.' True was a dear, but I would have liked to see the narrator call Lupus's bluffs. He felt like he was just horny baiting you the whole time, which is fine, but nothing ever actually happens. And given the inspiration for his character filling in for parts of his backstory, I would have liked less exposition and more action from him. I also wanted to say that the artwork was really well done. Great work!
Hey, can you follow me on BlueSky? I need to have a conversation with you.
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Hello!
A few things.
Ah, thank you! I've updated the PC version. I haven't really considered an Android version?
Almost 40% of my downloads for my submission are on Android, which I was surprised to learn. Media consumption is evolving!
P.S. I read your novel and have my comments saved on another PC will post them soon.